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A really random request....
Jun. 19th, 2008 06:13 pmI know some of you on here are literary types, so I was wondering if you could give this a read through if you have a spare half hour and leave me some C&C.
I know that at the moment it appears slightly directionless (mostly because at the time I started writing it was for an RPG not a story) but I've a few ideas floating around and want to try and pull it into shape before going much further. So yes....
( Story )
Edit:please ignore the fact that a random paragraph is in capitals. No idea why it is, so just read it as if it wasn't :)
I know that at the moment it appears slightly directionless (mostly because at the time I started writing it was for an RPG not a story) but I've a few ideas floating around and want to try and pull it into shape before going much further. So yes....
( Story )
Edit:please ignore the fact that a random paragraph is in capitals. No idea why it is, so just read it as if it wasn't :)
